Hey Lavinia, Taylor typing from home. I like your acrostic poem because the color's you have used makes the whole presentation stand out (I was scrolling through your blog and the color's was the first thing that caught my attention and I thought to myself I have to compliment them color's). Next time you do an acrostic poem is dont make your words so big and be creative don't just put your word's in a straight line and a touch of glitter(please don't actually add glitter). This reminds me of the time when I made an acrostic poem about my puppy Honey. How long did it take you to think of all those words to describe yourself? did you ask someone else or did you come up with them yourself?
Nice to type to can't wait to see you wonderful face in class after this horrible lock down/quarantine:)) -Taylor
Hey Lavinia It is Pyper from your class T1. I really like your poem. I like how you have put most of the words related to you. I also like the colours that you choose for the background with the text. Maybe next time you could make the first letter of the word a little smaller so that you ca see it better, it is a little hard to read. but anyways good job overall. From Pyper
Hey Lavinia, Taylor typing from home.
ReplyDeleteI like your acrostic poem because the color's you have used makes the whole presentation stand out (I was scrolling through your blog and the color's was the first thing that caught my attention and I thought to myself I have to compliment them color's).
Next time you do an acrostic poem is dont make your words so big and be creative don't just put your word's in a straight line and a touch of glitter(please don't actually add glitter).
This reminds me of the time when I made an acrostic poem about my puppy Honey. How long did it take you to think of all those words to describe yourself? did you ask someone else or did you come up with them yourself?
Nice to type to can't wait to see you wonderful face in class after this horrible lock down/quarantine:))
-Taylor
Hey Lavinia
ReplyDeleteIt is Pyper from your class T1.
I really like your poem. I like how you have put most of the words related to you. I also like the colours that you choose for the background with the text.
Maybe next time you could make the first letter of the word a little smaller so that you ca see it better, it is a little hard to read.
but anyways good job overall.
From Pyper